Attachment 5
Full List of Edits as Shown in Red-Lined Versions
Conservation Element
• Page 6
o Added the Climate Action Plan, Lagoon Management Plan, Integrated Adaptive Canada Goose Management Plan, Estero Municipal Improvement District (EMID) Urban Water Management Plan and Water Shortage Contingency Plan, and San Mateo Countywide Water Pollution Prevention Program under “Regional and Local Planning”
• Page 7
o Removed the note under and updated Figure 3 Community Engagement Overview
• Page 12
o Spelled out BCDC as “the San Francisco Bay Conservation and Development Commission” since that was the first use of the acronym
• Page 15
o Clarified that the Foster City Library has existing roof-mounted solar panels • Page 19
o Changed “ensure” to “support” in Policy C-3.3
o Changed “ensure” to “support” in Goal C-5
• Page 20
o Changed “to ensure” to “so” in Policy C-6.3
• Page 26
o Changed “ensure” to “help keep” in Implementation Program C-r o Added a footnote indicating the number of years for each timeframe. Short- term (1-5 years), mid-term (6-10 years), and long-term (10+ years) Parks and Open Space Element
• Page 4
o Added the Parks Master Plan, Capital Improvement Program, Lagoon Management Plan, Integrated Adaptive Canada Goose Management Plan, and Bike and Pedestrian Master Plan to the list of regional and local plans • Page 6
o Removed the note under and updated Figure 2 Community Engagement Overview
o Changed total acreage from 133 to 113
o Removed “and open spaces”
o Added “Many of these spaces are notable for features such as well- maintained landscaping, lagoon and bayfront views, shaded picnic areas, and family-friendly playgrounds that encourage regular use. ” • Page 7
o Removed “and ecological”
o Added “holding approximately 1,300 acre-feet of water” o Replaced “Poor water quality and an abundant Canadian Geese population has created maintenance and operations challenges for the City and has discouraged recreational use of the Lagoon. ” with “Water testing in the lagoon has detected avian DNA, and while the lagoon supports a large Canada Geese population, the results cannot be traced specifically to geese or to any single location. Nevertheless, the presence of Canada Geese contributes to ongoing challenges with cleanliness and maintenance.
Outside of designated beach areas, water quality is generally similar to bay w a t e r.”
• Page 8
o Replaced “ensure” with “support”
o Changed column heading in Table 1 from “Amenities” to “Major Amenities” o Removed “BBQ” from Boothbay Park amenities
o Removed “Parking Lot” from Leo J. Ryan Park amenities • Page 9
o Updated total neighborhood park acreage from 34.9 to 33.7 o Added “Beach” to Gull Park amenities
o Added “Beach” to Marlin Park amenities
o Moved Pilgrim Triton under “Mini Parks”
o Removed “Restroom” from Shad Park amenities
o Removed a comma from the Sunfish Park amenities list
o Changed the total number of mini parks from 6 to 8
o Updated total mini park acreage from 5.7 to 7.5
o Changed the acreage of Arturus Park from 0.75 to 0.8
o Changed the acreage of Gateshead Park from 0.1 to 0.7 o Changed the acreage of Leo Park from 0.015 to 0.1
o Removed “BBQ” from Baywinds Park amenities
o Updated the subtotal number of parks from 23 to 25
o Updated the subtotal of acres from 112.9 to 113.6
• Page 13
o Revised the text under “Park Acreage” to remove language regarding LOS standards and added that an appropriate LOS standard will be set in the future
o Changed the total acres for parks from 112.9 to 113.6 o Changes the grand total of acres from 134.9 to 135.6
• Page 16
o Removed the word “passive” from the first paragraph
o Added “potentially, ” removed “low impact, ” and removed “such as wildlife viewing, nature exploration, and picnicking” at the end of the second paragraph
• Page 21
o Added “Participation is reinforced by the settings themselves: waterfront views at Leo Ryan, shaded lawns at Boothbay, and playgrounds near picnic areas all create inviting environments for both organized programs and casual community use.”
o Replaced “to ensure programs are responding to” with “with the goal of keeping programs responsive to”
• Page 23
o Replaced “ensure” with “promote”
o Removed the bullet point on staffing deficiency
• Page 31
o Replaced “ensure” with “aim for” and replaced “are” with “to be” in Policy POS 1.1
o Replaced “ensure” with “support” in Policy POS 1.2. Removed “s” from “parks, ” changed “comfortable” to “comfort” and replaced “inviting” with “appeal” in Policy POS 1.2
o Replaced “ensure” with “strive to make” and removed “is” in Policy POS 1.3 o Replaced “ensure” with “promote” in Policy POS 2.2
• Page 33
o Replaced “ensure” with “support” in Policy POS 7.3
• Page 34
o Revised Implementation Program POS-f
o Added a new Implementation Program POS-g
• Page 35
o Replaced “ensure” with “maintain” in Implementation Program POS-w (previously POS-v)
• Page 36
o Added a footnote indicating the number of years for each timeframe. Short- term (1-5 years), mid-term (6-10 years), and long-term (10+ years)